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or scratch my name onto your bones
discreetly,
like a shadow,
light and shallow –
not a claim,
just a memento.

one day maybe you will find,
hidden on the side of your ankle
or beneath your shoulder blades,
the sighs I left behind;
and if you think of me then
that will be sweeter to me
than any burning revenge
could hope to be.
Day 2. Or technically 3 but the second poem isn't complete yet so... more of my rambling posing as poetry!!

[slight edits Jan15th 2013)
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silenced-echo Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this one ! <3 Though it is darker than what you usually write, it also feels more deep and open to interpretation. But I see you're not really posting once a day yet ;P
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Arthisa Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
and thanks for the comment and the +fav!! =)
this almost turned into an angry "burn and suffer" piece, but it was very ugly, so I took two sentences out and wrote this instead...
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Arthisa Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha... this daily thing is a bit hard... =___=
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Athazagoraphobias Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. :heart:
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Arthisa Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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