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Free Writing Assignment for CRW202 – Poetry, Prof. James Richardson.

I think it's a very sad thing that this poem is probably my most edited piece ever, because it's really not gone through that much edits yet... Still it ended up being one of my faves and that's from using a terrible evil prompt and having no idea what I'm talking about! At the very least it makes it easier not to end up with cliches.
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^^ Nice final version! Did the many changes come after or before the "dissection" by the class? I liked the previous format more, I think... Seeing it on two columns made it easier to pretend the line changes weren't on purpose and the paragraphs were just that: paragraphs...

I like tap water and scuffed fingertips, but rolling smoothly is kind of cliché still... didn't like narrower, it's just too long as a word :P

Anyway, good job and I hope your teacher likes it!